Kiwi Pineapple Parasol

As I stood under the waterfall
With a kiwi pineapple parasol..

Watercoloring again. This was inspired by Owl City's "The Yacht Club".
So, what do you guys think? Better or worse than Soleil? [link]
_{I really hope you guys say better cause Soleil was on much thinner paper not suited for watercolors at all and it looks terrible anyways}
Oh, and just one thing before anyone comments.. I'd really appreciate critiques on this. If you want to compliment it, that's fine, but I want to know how I can improve, since I'm only just starting to learn to watercolor.